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by zilvart

Hi zilvart, skipping details that you said that weren’t your objective, I’ll shoot my thoughts. Your drawing cause a different impressi...

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Hi zilvart, skipping details that you said that weren’t your objective, I’ll shoot my thoughts.

Your drawing cause a different impression. That is totally subjective from person to person, but what makes the difference is the color combination and the contrast of those. The dark/red (with some orange to simulate flames) differ from your orange selection. That plus the softer black cause a softer mood in the character. Remember red= passion, danger, etc. Orange remembers me to a warm sunset.

Also look at his mane and his back. There’s an obscure zone creating like a dark aura to reinforce that threatening looking.

I hope I said something you didn’t noticed, and good luck with your studies ;)

PD: Ignore the ratting, they are invented (yeah 5 originality lol). I cannot rate technique bc of going to the important stuff you wanted to learn...

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:iconlaura-graph:
Laura-Graph Featured By Owner Edited Feb 5, 2017
Many thanks for the watch and the faves :-)
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Svartya Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
hello! thank you very much for the watch! :meow:
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illuminara Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the watch! =D
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Sirmaril Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2016   Digital Artist
Thank you for the watch!^^
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Ghang Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2016
You're welcome ;)
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chubbzeh Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the favorite.

Have a nice day :D
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Ghang Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2016
Thanks for sharing your art, have a nice day you too :)
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chulii Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
hey there! thank you for your support! Cuddling up with someone close... St. Patricks Day! 

you'd make me happy, if you'd take a look at my website and leave me a comment there! OMG MOAR POEMS!
Spotlight www.juliadresch.com Spotlight
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Ghang Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2016
Hmm...I'm not really into photography...srry

Anyway i glance up at the website and looks nice, but it's the point of view of someone without idea about webs or photos so...good luck with that :P
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chulii Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
hahaha, alright :) thanks anyway!
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